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Post by Zee Kurogawa on Sept 13, 2008 13:48:58 GMT -5
The Player
Name: Call me Zee
RP Experience: over one year
Other Characters?: N/A
The Character
Name: Zee Kurogawa
Gender: Male
Age: 36
Species: Wizard
House: N/A
Year: N/A
Wand: 13 inch wand made of ebony with a dragon scale, a Chinese fireball scale
Special Abilities: Animagi- Hungarian Horntail Dragon
When transforming for the first time into his animagi form he nearly died. The process took nearly 8 years to completely transform. Each time it was only into partial forms. He was the age of 22 when he first decided to transform. It took a whole 14 hours to even get the scales to produce. The scales however cause him to have seizures. He was forced to the local hospital and was under constant supervision as he transformed back. The neck installment involved growing to a larger size, his body contorting, bones becoming larger heavier and muscles growing stronger. The sheer size of a dragon compared to that of a human was almost terrifying to even try to transforms into it. But he was very much determined. Each step left him wracking with pain and nearly crippled but also accustomed him to each step. As he grew closer and closer to becoming a dragon after 4 years his body was built to have mass muscle and body strength that just growing into the size of a dragon only hurt for 24 hours as long as he transformed back. The next step was getting all the details smoothed out. One whole year it took to recover after he tried making scales all over his body and a tail. It took a year and half afterward to get that pat down. His time in the hospital was costly and he extended his fortune as far as it could go. that is when his family steppe din and saw the rarity in such an accomplishment and funded him. So for the next few years they pushed him. Everything hurt everywhere he transformed. His body accustomed to the pain it was a relief when he was able to create the form after 7 years of trial and errors, and many many visits to the hospital. But the lats year it was for him to have less pain as he did the full transformation and to speed up the process. Needless to say it still takes a good hour for him to fully transform into a dragon and another hour to transform back. And he is wracked with pain during both transformations. But as soon as it is over he can regain his composure.
At the current time Zee transforms into that of a premature dragon. Meaning a teenage dragon instead of fully grown one. Currently he transforms into one of the size of a slightly bigger than a larger than normal horse. Measuring in Dragon form at 9 feet and 3 inches and in length from the tip of his "snout" to the end of the tail to 8 feet 9 inches. Only by inches is he bigger than an overly large horse but his stance and the way he walks in dragon form, makes him appear smaller.
Appearance: A tall man reaching at 6 foot 3 inches, a defect of his birth. His skin is naturally pale but years in the sun has tanned it, but he still enjoys the look of it being pale a few times. A figure to make a male gymnast jealous and with strength to back up to challenge a body builder, Zee is rather fully fit physically. But he does have some internal "muggle" problems. Schizophrenia runs in the muggle part of his family through the males. So it is very likely that Zee will suffer from the dysfunction as well.
There is also the fact that Zee does have a tattoo on his back, a magical tattoo that moves across his skin writing a Latin incantation for pain. He does not show it that often.
Zee's style of dress is more professional in the muggle sense instead of professional in the wizard sense. He wears suits and dress shoes, combing his hair back to be slick, other times he lets it loose when not in a professional state of appearance. Many times he has been confused with just a regular muggle but his manner of speaking and knowledge and being able to see the things he can give him away.
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Personality: A dark cruel wizard who cares little for others and is all about self satisfaction. He watches others with keen eyes and looks out for his best interests over others. He is a pretty selfish man. However with the deaths of wizards and experimentation he can see a profit in it for him, hence why he joined up with the Death Eaters. He has decided to pursue the experimentation the muggles started once he gets them out of the way. So he cares nothing for the actual rights. He finds it fascinating about the experimentation. He is willing to do all that he can to get what he wants, no matter the costs.
There are those he consider friends or rather people worthy of his trust. These are few and are always watched by him. He keeps a close eye on those he associates with and likes to make sure no one interferes with his life in a drastic negative way. This includes women. He sees them as pretty things to be used for reproduction. Pretty beings that he likes to keep around only for pleasure. He never allows them to know of any of his intentions except those to be had in bed. But he keeps that all hush hush and well under wraps.
Friends/Family: · Family members:
Mother- deceased Father- alive and well- funding Zee Brother- alive and well- touring in Egypt. · Friends: - N/A · Enemies:
Pets/Familiar: · Name:
William · Species:
A Red tailed Hawk · Magical Properties:
The Hawk has a keen sense of understanding of humans- muggles and wizards alike. Has the intelligence to read and communicate back but not through words, through gestures. · Appearance:
A regular looking red tailed hawk · History:
None, aside from being the "offspring" of an animagi and real hawk. The animagi loss sense of the world spending her entire life in animagi form in hiding and thus reproduced this way. The bird got into the hands of the Kurogawa family and gave it to Zee for his travels.
Character history: Born as Zurok Kurogawa, Zee changed his name once he was 11 hating the family name of Zurok. His father didn't care and neither did the rest of the family. They knew the boy got what he wanted even if he had no help. From birth he would fight and found ways around rules, tried new things all just to get what he desired and found profitable to himself.
So when Zee finally got into the school of his choice he spent little time in actually talking to his classmates unless necessary. Otherwise he spent it in studying doubling up with classes and trying to get out as fast as he could. He did. He graduated two years earlier and began his own personal studies. He delved into the dark arts, potion making and transfiguration. He was most particularly impressed with the idea of animagus. He did his research with that and pushed himself to find out the information. All the while he was practicing darker and darker spells along with the unforgivables and dark potions. He wasn't a genius he was just determined.
Finally at the age of 22 he had all the information and found out his animagus form and was pleased. Something that could actually kill him and he tried it and succeeded after 8 years.
At the age of 30 and nearly always in pain form his transformations he set out to find the Death Eaters and present himself with them. or at least try and bring the dark lord back. he heard of all the stories of how he was bale to come back again and again. So he wanted to bring him back in darker ways. But at the moment he joined the new Death Eaters hoping they would lead him to one of the three goals he has. one: Bring the Dark Lord back or find him Two: More power and Three: continue the research the muggles started but take it for his own.
If I need to add more just say the word, I didn't want to have to go too in depth considering 8 years of his life was spent in the process of transforming
Role play Sample: Zee stood in the dark heaving. His breath in short gasps and his arms clenched as he concentrated on the task before him. The intricate designs as he created the tattoo of his choice. A Magical tattoo that held significance in his transformation. Mixing Latin incantations that more effect when either thought of or written. It was the stream of words that gave the effect and magical properties of a pain killer. He needed it if he was to transform again. The pain that rippled through him always caused him to rest a bit afterward. It was the one downside to being a Dragon Animagi. But no matter he had plenty of time.
Eyes dark and watchful, he peeked out into the night. The man before him with the ability to create such tattoos watches him as he made the words in some form of design. Zee wasn't one for drawing but he knew what he wanted. He wanted the words to re write on him coming from a picturesque scene of a silhouette of a dragon in the sunset, flames all around him. Zee didn't want any color just black onto his skin to make it.
Finishing it the man quirked his eyebrows. It was relatively difficult to do but he had no doubt. Zee on the other hand was ready to kill if the man screwed up. Wincing internally as the need from the wand entered his skin he waited the 7 hours that it would take. The tattoo would stretch across his back as though someone wrote the words to scrawl around his back. Random stuff: Zee is a Death Eater
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Post by Ziggy Lupin on Sept 13, 2008 15:06:59 GMT -5
Denied [/size] Okkay. First off. You're avatar needs to be no bigger than 170x300[WidthxHeight] because as of right now, you are stretching the board like no other with that one. So please, re-size it.
As for the application itself. A few problems here.
Appearance must be at least 150 words. You only have 99 words. So please lengthen it.
Personality has a requirement of two paragraphs. You only have one.
I believe that is all. So, fix those two little things and the avatar and then let an Admin know when you have made the corrections and one of us will go over your application again.
Thank you.
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Post by †Yemon Smith† on Sept 13, 2008 18:29:12 GMT -5
I would really be more comfortable if your animangus form was not the size of an actual dragon. I [and I'm sure the other admins will agree] would feel much more comfortable if the size was at least toned to down to perhaps horse/cow/bear sized. Still big, but not MASSIVE [And it would seem more believable for a human to change into something that size, where as even I have a hard time seeing a small man warp into a massive dragon]
Also we would like to put it on watch. If we feel that you abuse the power [since it is going to be a massive amount of power] then we will have to deny you the usage of it. We are not saying you can not have it now, we are just saying that we won't tolerate the misuse of it. Do not take this personally; it is simply a precaution since we do not know your intentions or skills first hand.
For now, my only extra issue is perhaps changing the size. Other then that, I’m just telling you that you’re on watch [though I personally hope you can keep it, seeing as how we need adults and death eaters. =D]
Please do not take offense and thank you for applying and I hope you wish to stay with us! **bows**
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Post by Zee Kurogawa on Sept 14, 2008 2:41:21 GMT -5
I did as I was asked. I lengthened the appearance and the personality.
As for his animagus form issue. I understand. My intent originally was for him during such transformation to be the actual size of the dragon was to be his primary physical weakness. Where one could nearly kill him leaving him weaker after he was done transforming back. So I made it a "work in progress" For the moment he transforms to what appears to be a "teenage" dragon slightly bigger than a horse, particularly a Clydesdale horse. But he will not seem that big due to his posture in dragon form.
Thank you for your time.
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Post by Ziggy Lupin on Sept 14, 2008 3:07:08 GMT -5
Accepted. [/b] Thank you for revising. =] You may start rping whenever you wish now.
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