Anelia (Nellie) Langley

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The Player

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Name: Paije

RP Experience: About 1 year

Other Characters?: Nope first one

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The Character

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Name:Anelia (Nellie) langley

Gender: Female

Age: 26

Species: Witch

House: Slytherin

Year:

Wand: 12.5 walnut with dragon string core

Special Abilities: Skilled duelist

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Appearance:She is gothic in appearance, with pale skin, and almost black hair. Shes piercing blue eyes that stand out from the rest of her bland features. She wears only dresses, as she feels some need for femininity. Black and red are the colours of most of her clothing.


Personality: She's a stubborn women, who treats anyone that she considers lower than herself with little respect unless she is needed to. She is intelligent and yet shows very little emotion, other than anger. She would see crying as a weakness and begging for her life disgusting. However she is loyal and trustworthy, if she considers you an equal, she also loves a challenge. very few people have ever gotten close to her.

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Friends/Family:
· Family members: Mother and father
· Friends: None yet
· Enemies: There are many people that dont like her

Pets/Familiar: Owl
· Name: Fignus
· Species: barn owl
· Magical Properties:
· Appearance: black and brown boring
· History:

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Character history: Her mother and father, care little of what she does, they live happily in America, caring little of the needs of others. She has no siblings. She grew up in south england, and was taught how to duel and her other magical skills by her father aswell as going to hogwarts.

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Role play Sample:Her eyes searched the darkness, her hand loosely holding her wand. Someone was watching her. She didn't move, stood waiting, listening.
"Come out, come out where ever you are?" she whispered it,
"You cant hide forever"
With that she turned and faced the corner of the room, she knew this traitor to be, The blackness hid them from view but she could hear there shallow breathing.
Slowly she walked forward.
"Who are you, thinking you can follow me?" Still not being able to see past the end of her nose. But they didn't now that.
She smiled a she saw the shadows move. Yet the happiness never reached her eyes.
"Explain yourself", her sharp tone pierced the silence.


Random stuff:

[Ire Wright]

Denied.

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First off your Appearance and Personality is much to short. We require a minimum of 150 words for each, and yours only come in at 48 words (Appearance) and 72 words (Personality).

Your history is much, much, much too short as well as we require a minimum of three paragraphs for it.

You're Rp sample, also falls below the standards of both the application, and the site. All posts are required to be a minimum of 200 words, and your Sample only had 118.

It would also be nice if could could fix the coding in your application, as everything is bolded.

If you need help fixing these problems mentioned in your application please feel free to read the other applications that have been Accepted or seek the aid of a staff member.

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